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Travelling using self-telekenesis, man thinks "crap!"
©2007-2009 ~surrfant
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Entry to *Iscariot-Priest's 6-word story contest.

The problems that can arise when you lose focus of your destination...

EDIT: I came third. Thanks to all the judges. I wasn't expecting anything like third place.

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:iconle-pain-perdu:
Heh, I like this one...

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... great. Now I'm having an allergic reaction.
:iconyori1976:
Hilarious!!!

:rofl:

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Yori


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:iconiscariot-priest:
Congrats on third place, I think this officially deserves to be a formal deviation!

On a technical note, I don't think you need a full stop after the exclamation mark. Even in a quote it ends the sentence.

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“Now me lay down to sleep.
Mow da zeebas down like sheep.
Give dem to me nice and dead.
Me no happy ‘til me fed.”

-Bedtime prayer of crocs, Pearls Before Swine
:iconsurrfant:
That was the aim. :) Thank you very much.
:iconsurrfant:
That's a very good point. Thank you! I think I might move it over to deviations for now at least. I wasn't expecting to get anywhere near third.
:iconiscariot-priest:
Life does the darnest things.

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“Now me lay down to sleep.
Mow da zeebas down like sheep.
Give dem to me nice and dead.
Me no happy ‘til me fed.”

-Bedtime prayer of crocs, Pearls Before Swine
:iconlolit-ta:
i honestly think u shouldve got first... but kudos on 3rd
:iconsurrfant:
Thank you very much. That's flattering. :)

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